Six Sentence Sunday #26

Hi there, Sixers!

I didn’t get a chance to leave comments last week, so now I feel unbearably guilty. Imagine me, steeping in guilt all week. Sigh. Is that enough penance for you?

But life goes on, so here’s another six. I’ve been revising the second of a pair of books that will be coming out with Loveswept early next year. This one is called MAN FOR THE MOMENT. We’re in heroine Katie’s head, pondering the mysteries of the hero, Sean.

The closer they got to Buffalo, the more he’d retreated into himself, batting away the minor attempts at flirtation she’d made during what remained of the drive. Having arrived in the frigid north, he’d become colder than ever. Granite Man again. A great big hunk of frozen stone.

She didn’t buy it anymore. If she poured on enough heat, he would crack.

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20 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday #26

  1. Alix says:

    Ruth, I have nothing to add but OH MY GOODNESS!

  2. Pat F. says:

    Another exciting one to add to my list! To Ruthie!

  3. Karla Doyle says:

    Damn granite men! Six sentences and I’m sold. Might as well hand you my money now… ;)

  4. Awesome — I love her method for getting him to crack. :)

  5. Gemma Parkes says:

    Yes, pour on the heat, there are far too many ‘stone’ men! Beautifully written six.

  6. Linda Morris says:

    Great six! This is making me even grouchier that I haven’t had a chance to dive into the ARC of About Last Night yet.

  7. Love your six! Wonderful metaphor and I wonder what is making him so cold. I want to know more. :)

  8. Paula Martin says:

    Great six, hope she can warm him up!

  9. Kate Meader says:

    Sounds like she’ll need to switch to the major leagues of flirtation. Great six!

  10. Loved that last line! Perfect :)

  11. Silver James says:

    Oh, yeah! Cold stone cracks under heat every time. Go Katie!

  12. Can’t wait to see that heat.

  13. Kate Warren says:

    Very good writing, Ruthie. Hope her method works.

  14. S. J. Maylee says:

    Got to love a woman not settling for a cold shoulder. Granite man<– love it

  15. Of course now I’m totally intrigued and want to know what has made him close all up emotionally – great six!

  16. Carly Fall says:

    Great six, Ruthie! Can’t wait to see what she’s got in mind for Granite Man ;)

  17. Elin Gregory says:

    Go Katie!! Nice set up.

  18. I love your usage and descriptions of cold. There’s much going on! This story sounds like it’s going to get i-c-y! Brrrr

  19. Siobhan Muir says:

    Never give up, never surrender! I hope she can crack his stony facade. Great six, Ruthie. :)

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